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Phil Douglis | all galleries >> Galleries >> Gallery Nine: Composition -- putting it together > Coming home, Long Xuyen, Vietnam, 2008
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06-JAN-2008

Coming home, Long Xuyen, Vietnam, 2008

I was fortunate to be standing on the bank of the Mekong River just as this woman was bringing her boat home. I immediately saw the rhythms present in the scene – her red jacket echoed by the boat’s red trim, the curving boards alongside the ship repeated by the reflection in the water, the upright stance of the woman reinforced by the upright line on the bow of the ship. I also noted the massive negative spaces created by the shadowed areas and the sky reflected in the water. To make them all work, I took a gamble and framed the woman well up into the far left hand corner, significantly above the magical “sweet spot” dictated by the so-called “rule of thirds,” which would be down a bit and somewhat to the right of where she is now. But rules are made to be broken. I compose my pictures not for aesthetic effect, but for meaning. I wanted to detach her from everything else, yet still make her responsible for bringing the ship safely in to the dock. It is the incongruity of her precarious perch in the distant corner that energizes the image for me. She seems to be navigating the ship by remote control. The conical hat is just as important – it is the brightest spot in the frame, it stands out against the black shadows in the negative space, and I place it so close to the edge of the image that it generates considerable tension. All of which proves my point: there are no rules for photographic composition and we don’t put together our pictures primarily to please the eye or the senses. Rather, we compose our pictures to best tell the story we are trying to tell.

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Phil Douglis27-Feb-2008 19:54
Thanks, Tim, for commenting on the role of triangular composition in this image, which is one of my favorite travel photographs. I like it because it expresses so much about Vietnam. As you say, the river is the lifeblood of the Delta, and these people have become masters of the Mekong. The triangles created by the conical hat and the flow of the prow of the boat, as well as in the reflection that comes back to the boat, glue the image together. Shooting people wearing conical hats just because they are wearing them is, as you say, a cheap visual cliche. In this case, the hat floating in the shadows lends meaning by echoing the shape of the boat itself as well as giving the image its sense of place. As you say, it ties her to the river. I use this image as my desktop picture and every time I look at it, I see more in it -- its composition, reflection, degree of abstraction, and metaphorical content stirs my imagination in different ways. It is a helpful addition to this gallery on composition. It would be just as useful in my reflections gallery or in my triangles gallery.
Tim May27-Feb-2008 17:25
As we saw during our trip - the river is so important in the life in the Delta. I feel the echoing pattern of triangles emphasizes this point in this image. The first triangle is the hat, but then there is the triangle created by the lines of the boat echoing down to the all important river, and the reflected lines echoing up creating the visual center at the prow of the boat, the river itself. The triangular hat ties the woman to the river.
Which leads me to another point. The ubiquitous conical hat can become a cheap visual cliche which shouts Vietnam - I found myself dealing with this as I was making images- but they can also be used creatively as you have done in so many of these Vietnam images.
Phil Douglis21-Jan-2008 19:09
Thanks, Vera, for noting the simplicity of this image. You will find that photographic composition is often a matter of getting in less in order to say more, thereby simplifying the image and making it easy for a viewer to read and comprehend. And yes, there is considerable scale incongruity here, because I wanted to make the task of docking the boat seem daunting. Yet she is handling it perfectly.
Guest 21-Jan-2008 16:30
Wow, you have really simplified the picture, including only part of the boat, the woman and the shadow. I imagine it would look very different if we were to see the entire boat. I find it interesting as she looks so small to be in control of such a big boat. The way in which you took the photo emphasizes this. It makes me think of how hard these women work.
V.
Phil Douglis20-Jan-2008 01:58
That's the mark of a very special picture, Mo. It demonstrates so many of the key principles that make images expressive. So many of its strengths come through the composition, however, that I put it here.
monique jansen19-Jan-2008 10:22
This could as easily have fit in "light and shadow", "reflections" and several other galleries.Scale incongruity as well.
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