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20-SEP-2007	Shirley Haden

River House on Stilts, full wider angle shot
by Shirley Haden

Olympus E-300
1/60s f/4.5 at 14.0mm iso400 full exif

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Shirley Haden		23-Sep-2007 03:09
Thanks for all the ideas. I will mess around this evening and see what happens :o) I'm really enjoying the input from you all. You guys/gals are my best learning tools!

Guest		22-Sep-2007 15:21
I like this better than the original, the nearest tree give interest and there is the faint hints of a track running into the scene. Miro's suggstion is also interesting. You could play for hours with this one :-)

ArtP		22-Sep-2007 12:37
I don't have a problem w the noise, but that foreground tree is interesting. I tried a crop including the tree and trimming just above the windows (taking off most of the roof) Can't say it's any better. I think the original crop would work if there was something interesting in that empty foreground... A brightly painted canoe, a highway cone, a stuffed toy... I don't know :o

Miroslav Kral		21-Sep-2007 21:59
Shirley! Please try this: make a portrait format. Crop out left side(red boat, wall). On the right side leave only those broken tree. Crop the rest of the forest. Foreground is O.K. Crop the branches above the house like they are on the first image. That's the way I would make composition of this picture. Maybe not the best way and by the book, but It is how I see it. Thanks for confidence.