Chris,
Much improved.
You might also want to darken the mid tones a bit to enhance the sky.
Personally I also like it when the crop makes the two top wires start at the corners of the frame, but that's just my taste...
Mike.
Guest
11-Dec-2005 05:06
Straightened and colors (histogram?) adjusted a bit too.
Thanks for the tips.
Chris
cbses
08-Dec-2005 00:17
I was about to make the same comments as Mike re. straightening and the sky. I know it's hard to work with gray skies, but lightening would also add a bit more defintion to the power lines and supports - and still allow them to fade out... ad infinitum.
Bob
Interesting geometry and nice lead-in with the wires. The title is spot-on - the pylons certainly do appear to extend as far as the eye can see.
A couple of suggestions:
1) Playing with the histogram could bring out some interest in the sky.
2) Either bring to the vertical or increase the tilt a bit more - at the moment it just looks not quite vertical.