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SWEngineer
27-Nov-2005 00:31
Wow. Everything seems well thought out here. Great colors, good lighting and fun title. If it has any weaknesses at all, it might be that the composition seems a bit static / too symetrical about the center. I'd like to see this again with the garlic bulb partially opened to expose a few cloves. It might work too to replace the black background (paper?) with a bed of basil leaves perhaps also cut into thin strips. Finally the pasta(?) seems like it's somewhat outcast and perhaps could be rearranged to further emphasize the title of "friends". Enough nitpicking. Good luck. -Mark