excellent natural framing, nice find Robbie, very pretty :)
Guest
20-Oct-2005 20:25
ok, this is really a place from the imaginary fairy tales, love the look of this, very well created but I see a couple little distrating elements , the branch on the very top right area has an opening, I don't think it should be there, and as i read renen's comment as I type this I see she has the same thing in mind as i do, so i ditto her comment. jmho, =O)
Guest
18-Oct-2005 08:59
Great work Robbie! Perfect! :o)) Voted!
Now it makes me feel like walking to the house and see who's living in there.. :o))
Guest
07-Sep-2005 21:43
Wow,, excellent compo and love the greens...
like a fairy tale setting
cheers
I agree this version is better than the 1st attempt. I think the spot of green above the tree limb on the right coming out of the trunk is a distraction. I think that limb across the top is effectively working as your upper frame. I don't think you can crop it as it takes out too much of the limb toward the left side and leaves too many unattached limbs hanging down. You might be able to clone in more limb to fill the area and/or darken that little area more.
I think if you can clone some of the purple flowers in the sort of second layer of them to lead back toward the hedge opening you might unify the piece a bit. You might also need to clone in a limb coming across the cottage area a little bit to help us see it fully in the setting. Just some of my ideas. Hope they help.--Rene
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