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Phil Douglis | all galleries >> Galleries >> Gallery Nine: Composition -- putting it together > Ebb tide, St. Malo, France, 2004
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30-AUG-2004

Ebb tide, St. Malo, France, 2004

St. Malo is a maritime city. It has always made its reputation and living from the sea. It is remembered in history as the City of Corsairs, sending its famous mariners out to make discoveries, fight wars, and seize foreign ships as prizes. Yet these St. Malo boats are not going anywhere until the tide returns. I made this image from high on the ramparts surrounding the city, fascinated by the sight of six boats in various stages of distress. It is an incongruous concept – we are used to seeing boats riding at anchor in the water, not uselessly anchored while on land. I organized my picture around the “s-curve” or “zigzag” principle. I want to pull your eye back and forth across the frame as you move back into the picture. I anchor my image (pun intended) at the bottom of the frame. The dark mass of kelp surrounding the helpless boat in the lower right foreground is the focal point of the picture. I hope you will then move back to the left, comparing the only ship that seems to be actually floating at anchor to its beached companions. Our eyes move up its mast to the boat just behind it, and then sweep right along a string of muck to another boat, just inland, before returning left again, back to the shoreline. While we are busily moving back and forth, we are also moving into the depths of this picture. As we arrive at the most distant boats, we come to dry sand and a curving beach, and then the sea finally carries us out of the picture at upper right. This kind of composition is the equivalent of a journey, and works best when that journey is the point of the picture itself. In this case, it most certainly is.

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Phil Douglis13-Apr-2007 20:40
Thanks for taking a "visual journey" through this image with me, Chris. That is what composition does -- it helps the viewer navigate the image with clarity, ease, and emphasis. You moved from detail to detail, and when you were finished, you grasped what I was trying to express. In this case, the journey we take through the image is the essential idea.
Chris Sofopoulos13-Apr-2007 09:14
Powerful image and composition. I really love every detail and every part of it!
Phil Douglis09-Oct-2004 01:53
Thank you, Peter, for your substantive comment on this image. I was fascinated with the points you raise. One of the functions of expressive photography is that it has the capability of saying many different things at the same time. Your observations on this are thoughtful and fascinating.
Guest 07-Oct-2004 15:53
For me this photo is about the power of nature and the our attempts to harness it. I see boats, so important for us yet so insignificant in the bigger picture, tossed away like feathers by a storm. What really made the photo for me are the shadows casted by other boats at the top, and I am asking myself what's there and how come they survived?
The composition if great, everything falls into a place in a haotic way, the S curve is our guide to explore.
Peter
Phil Douglis25-Sep-2004 23:49
Thanks, Bruce, for this first of so many comments you left today on my new European additions. Composition does not ensure that everyone takes the same journey through a picture. It only ensures that the journey will be a comfortable one.

Phil
Guest 25-Sep-2004 16:57
This image certainly does provide a journey for the eye. Mine didn't quite take the exact journey you described (mine was more of a looping, spiraling kind of journey) but it was a enjoyable journey nonetheless. I think you're the only photographer I've ever known who has used a "string of muck" as a compositional device! :)
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