Judges Comments

An interesting and well constructed idea with the main figure in the bath, the apple and the red blood. The reflection in the water works nicely and doesn’t detract. The front leg peeking out
of the water is out of focus and as a result a distracting element in the composition. Consider your choice of lens and focal range and in turn aperture to ensure all relevant elements in the
composition are sharp. Perhaps darken further to reduce it’s prominence in the frame?. The chosen composited background elements supports the dark, sinister mood and theme of the image. Well considered.
Their perspective/size in the scene relative to the main character feels out of place. Consider darkening the brightness of the pillar behind her head to not draw so much attention to the element and it’s perspective.