Judges Comments

Obviously a photographer wearing a black rapid camera strap, however, we find the text on the logo is a distraction.
This is a candid moment, as our subject is not aware of the photographer's presence. He is totally relaxed
and focussed in his own world. The directional light falling on his face is coming from the left and
provides modelling. We found there was not enough room in front and the image would benefit from
a crop to the right leaving just the cream wall, as it doesn't add to the story. This crop
would also remove the out of focus object in the bottom right hand corner.