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Phil Douglis | all galleries >> Galleries >> Gallery Ninety-five: Back to the beach -- finding new stories in familiar subjects > Frustration, Mission Beach, California, 2015
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26-SEP-2015

Frustration, Mission Beach, California, 2015

At first glance, these beachgoers gathering near the water’s edge seem to be enjoying a sunset. But a closer look says otherwise.
The man closest to us looks at his cell phone and kicks a spout of backlighted sand into the air with his foot. That flying, glowing sand becomes the focal point of the entire image. He seems frustrated by what he sees on the screen he holds in his hand. His frustration triggers an incongruous moment, and I strengthen the point of the picture by converting it from the brilliant colors of sunset to a simple black and white abstraction. In vivid color, the sunset reflecting on the water draws attention away from the spout of flying sand. In black and white, the sunset is neutralized, and the flying sand, which is the point of my picture, takes precedence.

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Phil Douglis11-Jan-2016 20:43
Thanks for your comment on this image, Rose. I agree -- this image was originally full of golden tones. By converting it to black and white, that gold goes away, and the eye can better grasp the flying sand, which is the whole point of this image.

As for your suggestion to perhaps crop out the only seated person in this image, along with the reflected sunset, that would reduce the rhythmic horizontal thrust of the image itself -- I intended to make the eye of the viewer move from the flying sand, which is full of energy, to the contrasting "up and down" relaxed rhythms that give the frustrated kick its incongruous context. I start that flow off with the only seated person in the picture, as he contemplates the beauty of a sunset. He offers a perfect counterpoint to the angry burst of flying sand just behind him.
sunlightpix10-Jan-2016 22:55
Great choice of black and white! Color would take away from the tension. I might even take it further by cropping out the man on the far left and the solar reflection. We think of a beach as a place to unwind and relax, yet this guy's frustration is explosive. Interesting how nobody notices him. V
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