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23-APR-2010

Spring


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John Naman 10-May-2011 16:17
This is technically a very difficult image and it is a very good attempt. The lines and angles are excellent. I wish the tip of the leaf were not cut off at the bottom and a little less on the top wouldn't have done any harm, i.e., point down a little lower. This is VERY difficult to focus. I think what you got was the edge of the center leaf. I think it would have been better to focus either on the tip of the leaf that got cut off or the center of the curl, where the water drops are. (I'm a water drop guy, but the other is valid). If you go for the drops, the background lines would be sharper too. Can you reshoot this? A-, almost there, very well seen, very hard to get perfect.
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