Judges Comments
Interesting scene, and a good angle to show us the both the main group and the other groups behind. A problem is the front figure looking away;
either wait till he turns round, or else crop his face out.. It is a trap in this sort of shot to line up one side of the frame with the vertical lines, as the other side ends up on more of an angle.
A better idea is to make sure the centre looks right, and a small amount of convergence from both sides looks more natural