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03-JUN-2010

Brick Walk


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Steve Passman 10-Jun-2010 12:50
This is a nice scene with a pretty S-curve, but I'm not sure what you're trying to say. If you're really interested in the brick walk, then the distracting trees, people and other stuff need to go, and the exposure should emphasize detail in the walk. If it's really a scenic, then the walk is too predominant, you need to clean up the grass quite a bit, and you need softer light. It's a good subject, worthy of more work and thought.
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