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24-JAN-2010 (c) Doug Cruden

25th - "Dreaming of Babylon"

Hailes Church, Glos view map

(Richard Brautigan writes the most surreal and funniest of books...)

Brautigan was another of my childhood literary heroes - his surreal and yet completely acceptable novels struck a chord with me, especially his early books - 'Trout Fishing in America', 'In Watermelon Sugar' and 'The Hawkline Monster - A Gothic Western' were my favourites, and ones which I would read again and again. Terrific stuff!

So here we were having a mooch around the very beautiful Hailes Church yesterday, collecting portfolio pics for Finn's A Level Photography while Naomi mucked out the beast. I turned round, and there was Finn just gazing into space*...a quick grab shot, but I think this works - there's a certain detachment about it I like.

Not a complex one this - RAW file into ACR, reduced Clarity and boosted Brightness; I also put in a custom Curve. Then into CS3 and duplicated the layer - I made a selection of the glass of the shades, and converted that to B&W via tweaking the High Contrast Red Filter; inverting the selection, I converted the rest of the pic to B&W via a tweak of the Green preset - this double B&W conversion gave a nice clear image of the sunspecs as well as smoothing out the main subject. I flattened the image, then created two duplicate layers - the first I changed the Blending Mode to Screen, the second to Multiply. I reduced the Opacity of the Multiply layer to around 75% - this let some of the highlights through from the Screen layer below (I reduced the Screen layer's Opacity to around 80%). Lastly, I selected the 'in focus' area around Finn's face and Smart Sharpened that (65% at 2px), and then resized for the web.

Monday 25th's otherworldly entry to the Challenge; click here for other monochromed Pbasers in January

*He was actually contemplating a shot, not being a typical vacant teenager!!!

Nikon D300 ,Nikkor 50mm f/1.8 AF
1/1250s f/1.8 at 50.0mm iso200 full exif

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Jola Dziubinska28-Jan-2010 00:52
Very nice portrait, delicate tones and exposure.
Guest 27-Jan-2010 01:56
Wonderfil candid of your sun... the reflectiosn on his sunglasses really add to this. Hope he got some good shots after all the daydreaming :)
Sheila26-Jan-2010 23:49
Excellent shot of his contemplative mood!
Ronald Bijtenhoorn26-Jan-2010 18:40
Great portrait; well composed with this wonderful reflection
lisamidi26-Jan-2010 17:15
P.S. Hmm, I have to add that in Germany, "cool" means "super, toll "...in case the meaning of "cool" is no more positive in english, kids expressions are changing so fast...:-)
lisamidi26-Jan-2010 17:12
This is so cool, the sunglasses and the boy behind... The reflections are spectacular! v
Carl and Racine Erland26-Jan-2010 13:35
Great candid shot and reflection.....and you've just got to love the glasses! - Racine
borisalex26-Jan-2010 06:49
Soft touch on a cool looking guy! This is what they want... to be cool! Great portrait!
Walter Otto Koenig26-Jan-2010 02:50
What a cool kid, I guess he takes after his father. :)
Great portrait Doug. I really like the reflection in his shades. "V"
Cindi Smith26-Jan-2010 00:50
Oh yeah...love those reflections in the glasses. He looks too cool for school! I just love this! Excellent work here!
carol j. phipps26-Jan-2010 00:23
Wow! Fantastic! V
Guest 25-Jan-2010 23:38
Shades and hair really stand out.
Phillip Normanton25-Jan-2010 22:59
Far too cool :o))
Available Light Images25-Jan-2010 22:03
Super work Doug, there are some aspects of your workflow I will have to have a play with... My D3x arrived yesterday so I spent most of the day doing some exhaustive tests between it and Juanli's 5D2 and the D700 :-)
Frank Brault25-Jan-2010 21:22
I love the mixture of sharpness and softness. The reflections are great. V
Stewart Mitchell25-Jan-2010 19:20
Too cool in the shades!! The refelection in the specs relly adds some extra interest, great work :)
Kevin Chester25-Jan-2010 18:44
The detached portrait always get my vote. There my favourite every time over the starring down the Lens jobbies. Detached is a good name for them
J. Scott Coile25-Jan-2010 17:35
WOW. Great reflection.
Kathryn25-Jan-2010 17:09
I agree, beautiful portrait and the reflections cleverly caught.
LynnH25-Jan-2010 16:49
So clever and well done. The reflections add a whole 'nother dimension!
Guest 25-Jan-2010 16:15
Great candid Doug, cool reflections and a very nice processing!!!
Gary Blanchette25-Jan-2010 15:07
Very cool editing Doug.
Ann...25-Jan-2010 13:17
Lovely candid.
Yvonne25-Jan-2010 11:13
A beautiful portrait - love the reflecting lens!
Guest 25-Jan-2010 10:59
A very nice portrait with beautiful reflections in the glasses.
Stephanie25-Jan-2010 10:55
Very, very cool portrait! :)
Barbara Heide25-Jan-2010 10:46
way cool!
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