Bethany in an abandoned farm house.
Two flashes were used here. On the left of the camera an umbrella was used. Notice the soft diffused shadow it made. A bare flash was on the right side of the camera.Much harder shadows were cast by it, almost to the point of ruining this photo.(look at the shadwo of her arm.) The solution to this was the umbrella should of been raised so it was shooting at about a 45 degree angle down towards her. The bare flash should of been bounced off the ceiling, instead of straight towards her.
( Ben told me what I did wrong when I got home)
Oh well, as long as we learn from our mistakes.....