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Scene 6

The scent of spaghetti sauce followed me as I went to the back entrance where the back staircase was. I had seen most of the main floor and Ann had mentioned the sewing room upstairs. I didn't think about it at the time but somebody could very easily slip in the back door and up the stairs without anybody knowing it. That was at a time when everybody in small towns were honest and nobody locked their doors. How quickly the Clutter murders had been forgotten, but then this wasn't Kansas nor even close to it.
A fleeting shadow slithered along the upstairs wall but it didn't bother me. I hurried up the steps.
At the top the air grew warm and heavily scented of old attic mingled with the scent of the Spaghetti sauce. Usually cooking odors makes a house seem homey but the mingling of scents somehow seemed unsavory.
I glanced down a long shadowy hall that ended with two windows though I could only see one I knew the other was in front of the second staircase that went down into the living room I had noticed it on my previous visit.
There were two closed doors along the corridor, but the third and closest door stood open. I walked over and started to step inside a mini sewing factory then caught my breath and quick-stepped back out into the hall my hand over my heart.
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waterfalls man10-Oct-2009 13:34
Beautiful,V
poetry66610-Oct-2009 11:01
Chilling old staircase with a great feeling of a presence being there. Nice lighting too Char.V
Sheila10-Oct-2009 09:21
My heart is beating faster. Do I want to read further.... Yes, but with the light on.
Guest 09-Oct-2009 12:53
Ahhhh j'adore cette vision, l'ambiance inquiétante et mystérieuse...parfait angle choisie! Bravo!V!
Neal Nye09-Oct-2009 11:18
Your image is as scary as your words. You're doing a beautiful job with this. Tell your agent to arrange a publisher!
laine09-Oct-2009 09:06
I remain intrigued...your a great story teller & writer, Char.
NealyBob09-Oct-2009 06:47
Great shot Char! Looks like a scene from a horror movie~! V
January Grey09-Oct-2009 04:13
Uh oh! Wonder what was in that room?? Scary bedtime story :) Terrific shot of the staircase, Char. Great effects! V~
Guest 09-Oct-2009 03:34
Another stunning image, Char. Your work has been outstanding. BV
Rick Bricker09-Oct-2009 02:38
Oh great...thanks a lot....now I have to sleep with a light on.Great shot to set the tone of the tale!
Tom Munson09-Oct-2009 01:05
Terrific work, Char!
Hank Vander Velde09-Oct-2009 00:57
Beautiful, but spooky Char.
Marcia Colelli09-Oct-2009 00:35
wonderful, can't wait to find out what is in the room V
Jay Levin08-Oct-2009 20:21
Now I'm afraid to even turn on my computer tomorrow! Great work, Char. V
Patricia Kay08-Oct-2009 19:35
Fabulous image and words Char...Cant wait for what happens next!!! BV
Jim Coffman08-Oct-2009 18:44
Great work ,Char! V
Al Chesworth08-Oct-2009 18:00
Tis spooky enough for me.
LeuAnna Taylor08-Oct-2009 17:34
Your shot adds just the right amount of spookyness to your story - I can almost hear the creaking of a stair or two.
bill friedlander08-Oct-2009 17:18
Even the walls have goose bumps.
Martha Albuquerque08-Oct-2009 14:40
Uhuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~~~~~~~~~~sPOoKYyy~~~ AwEsOmE!!!!! V~
Guest 08-Oct-2009 14:16
Oufffffffffff, go back, love it, go on,lol.the image is soooo creepy Char.
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