Looking at the original, there are a number of good crop possibilities besides this one, which I like. Would've been good for Brent's old "crop" challenge.
Thanx Colin, I tried a tighter crop as per your suggestion... much less cluttered!
btw, I'm adding the original, so you can see just how much clutter I cropped out...
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15-Jul-2009 17:51
Really nice idea, I love the fall of shadows and gental graduations of white in this and as an image I think its nearly there but maybe not quite, too many competeing elements.
How about a closer view, perhaps the middle right section, get it cleaner and the verticals alighned (I'm a bit OCD about that!)