(I think I'm looking at the edited version as per Ted's suggestion...) This is a really strong composition Finn - excellent perspective and PoV, with the tracks really taking the eyes through the frame. Your choice of toning is good too - well done lad!! :o))
I like the strong composition and the toning suits the 'grittiness' of the stone aggregate between the rails.The featureless sky is a little distracting - maybe some cropping? Getting perfect symmetry of the rails requires careful choice of camera position;keep an ear open for approaching trains! Well done! Check out my version athttp://www.pbase.com/tedparkins/image/106545667
