Nice work.
I feel easy to dream awake. In sleeping , I dream, but ever I am not part of it but the director of a movie, the dream, or looking at my dream and trying to anticipate what way the director should choose. I doubt Freud could understand that, as it has much to do with movies...
Back to your dream/image, it is clear your line. Could you go further?
I must admit , I have in my mind, as the standards, the Anna Pagnacco dream pictures http://www.pbase.com/annapagnacco/in_my_mind or her other Gallery,
http://www.pbase.com/annapagnacco/colors. Yes, I admit I am biased or set for the Anna way, but you must do your way and I must look at , thinking there are are other styles.
Abraço,
jorge