This is my #1 choice. Everything works! The composition, the expression, the colors. Yes! Here are a few suggestions to try in photoshop/lightroom. I would tone down, SLIGHTLY, the highlight on the nose and lower lip. I would get rid of what looks like partial black letters on the yellow hood, especially the one in the upper right. I would burn in the little triangle of white or clone to plaid in the upper left. I would try a little vignetting. I have a trick there if you haven't done much of that. These are suggestions to try. If you don't like the results, don't do them.
