Lovely candid. Perhaps eliminate the lady off the left but it doesn't bother me. What I see immediately is the lovely girl with the pretty earrings and smile. I think the background actually adds to the sense of place here.... It's a public place after all... Great, and I mean wonderful image. jano
She has a beautiful smile, which you have captured quite well, but that person standing behind her is very distracting. Would you consider cropping off the right, the top, and the left (may as well get rid of that laughing woman in glasses while you're at it). Let this beautiful young woman really be the central focus of this photo.
--Mary Anne