Very nice work ISO. Jano is right. 4+, but the problem is not with the shadow. Its the position of the key light. It should be a little lower and a little nearer to the camera. The model also has a very slight flat surface on her nose. The correct postion of the light would take care of both these problems, along with a slight grey on both sides of her nose. Other nit pick is the crop of her hair at the right edge. Overall excellent work and excellent PS too. Tone is just wonderful and warm. -Cat
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19-Dec-2005 10:11
Once again i am the nameless Guest....
DOAH!!
~Canoneer
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Guest
19-Dec-2005 10:07
How do you people convince your models to pose for you?? Whenever i ask my girfriend to pose she runs!!!I tried everything in vain, even money!!:)
Wonderfull portrait. One that deserves a LARGE print! Beautiful face and a great photographer! I Like everything about this photo, the angle, the B&W treatment, the lighting, and even [the annoying ;)] jano's comments (How can she ALWAYS see such details???) !!!!
If it hadn't been pointed out, I may not have noticed it. (The shadow under the left eye.) When you study it, it looks like she has a shiner, but without it being pointed out, I probably wouldn't have noticed because the lighting and tone of this is perfect, along with the model being gorgeous! Another great image. ~Britt
