Alexeig, Great capture! Cannot say about the man, but the lady surely is looking at the display-box in the window. She might even be interested. Looks good now that you have removed the distraction from the corner. - Cat
Is it better now?
Passerbys: these are reflections of people who are looking at this moment at this very jevellery display maybe thinking about buying something. Thats why the pic is called "Desired".
And where is the box? The shop display is a confined three dimensional space roughly rectangular. Isn't it a kind of a box for this reason, proudly displaying what is inside?
Pillar, pipe, passerby and reflections all pull your attention away from what should be the focus... which is just as well since it's not a box :-) ... ok, maybe just in my eyes.
