Dean, This looks a lot better. Not sure if you should crop the bottom a bit more to cut out the bottom left corner as it has a noticeably different texture. Perhaps see if anyone else finds it distracting. Even with this in the corner, I still feel the photograph overall is considerably more intimate than the previous version. Best regards, Brian
This is nice Dean! Id suggest cropping out the lens glare and prism effect on the left side and while you are at it a bit of the top could go as well. As it is now, the couple feels a bit too far away to feel the love. By cropping, I think youll get a more intimate feeling. I would keep as much of the textured wood as possible as this really adds a lot to the photograph and makes it on topic. Just my 2 cents Brian