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30-Jul-2007 18:34
Thank you for your comments Najinski. I agree that the foregorund was grabbing a bit too much attention so I've followed your advice and made a small change, thanks again. Michael
I think the decision to go B&W here is an excellent choice. It really emphasises the strong geometry of the fences and shadows.
There is just enough toning in the foreground bricks to to lead the eye into the scene but I find the bricks in the bottom left just on the verge of competing for attention. Regards, -Najinsky