Cute subject and gorgeous colors. --Melanie (mlynn)
Guest
06-Sep-2005 22:18
Sweet subject, Lee, and the colors are lovely and vibrant. The centered composition works well here. (*) I agree that you should get rid of that little bright spot on the opposite shore. -Michael
Thanks guys! I did alter the appearance in PSE to add more interest to the center of the picture.
Chris, Her arm is reflected on the rail Good eye for detail.
theFly
Guest
05-Sep-2005 02:22
This is a really cool image. I think that the composition works well, but the lighting is funky. Since it is natural, somethign unnatural had to happen to it :) I also think something wierd is going on with the left arm, maybe it is just the reflection on the rail, but it creates sort of a blur that I find a bit distracting. Regardless this is a keeper image. Chris
Ahh, but the little split of sand is where her eyes are gazing and where her imagination, at this moment, is taking her. I Love the balance and color. Best Wishes, Traveller
I though this was Lonnit from the thumb. For a centred composition it works well. I think the louder colours on the clothes are the key to this. Trying to get my head around your processing here. Clothes seem more lit than her legs? I can see an all over gradient/burn but thats OK. Only nit pick is that area of sand in the distance which is fighting for the centre stage.
