Yes, I think it is better. Hard to say without the original next to it, but her hair looks more natural now. That was the main place I thought it was too sharpened. Just noticed that it looks like she doesn't have a right arm. Maybe she doesn't, I don't know, but if she does it's been blown out. It's a pretty small area so you can probably clone part of her neck to fill that little space in the corner. -bee1000
