I like the simplicity and use of B&W, but could use more contrast and an off-center (perhaps way off center) composition. A more oblique shooting angle, and perhaps a wider angle lens, could heighten the appeal as well. --Joe
I notice some pretty low lighting here - you can up the lighting (keeping it diffuse) so the exposure/iso isn't quite so challenging... Nice idea. -Ed Hahn
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29-Mar-2005 00:51
Thanks. I agree, it would have been better to stop down the aperture a few clicks so all of both clips were in focus. This is why I'm trying to do more of these challenges since you can get great feedback and learn so much. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
CM
