Thank you, Olaf, for your comments. I went around in circles trying to decide on the frame, and I see what you mean. Frames are a new thing for me, and I need lots more practice. This was a shot I took on my way to the car after shooting about 100 shots of the fountain that was to my right. When I noticed the vivid colors in the reflection, I had to take the shot. It's unusual because this must have been between tides because the waster was so still, hence the smooth refections. Thanks again... Tim
Olaf.dk
07-Jun-2004 19:37
The best feature of this shot is the reflection in the water - I just love that! That was not the first thing I noticed though. The frame was - and that is not positive. The frame should not compete for attention.
Also, due to its relative height and striking architecture, I feel the modis-building is the center of interest in this photograph - and therefore I would prefer it to be more off-centered. The buildings to the viewer's left of the modis-building are mediocre in comparison, but the bridge with all its details is a visually worthy counterweight to the modis-building.
I am not sure how, but feel a different crop possibly could improve this shot. Maybe a crop won't do, maybe what is needed is a shot from a different angle, from further to the viewer's left, having the bridge lead to modis-building?
While I offer no concrete suggestions, except for getting rid of the colored frame, I hope this analysis will prove to be helpful. Anyway, that was definitely my intention - to be helpful.
