This is really very good as well but perhaps a little lighter than the mood would suggest.
Great detail.
Taking on the role as a 'pain in the ....' I think I would prefer that vapour trail vertical section to be 'cloned out'. It was 'man-made' so I think it is legitimate to take it out because my eye keeps getting drawn to it as a slight distraction.
That is the trouble with aeroplanes... they just wont fly 'in-keeping- with the cloud formations... lol
Kevindar... that is just my opinion and I am being probably a little over-picky, so feel free to differ.