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23-APR-2012 Laurie

Bang, Bang

Party
up front
fighting out back
bang, bang you're dead
Party


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Digital Nuts24-Apr-2012 15:01
Very well done and pertinent. John M
creativematrix24-Apr-2012 06:25
This is huge! Great commentary on the the times we live in. It seems like we are going back to the cave days. Ahhh, this is such a crazy world. I absolutely love the drain. Perfect. Great Cinquain too. --skunk
creativematrix24-Apr-2012 05:13
But isn't that how 'A~few' southern parties roll...a bag of skittles, an Arizona Tea mixed with racism and topped off with a large slathering of "Hold Your Ground" Rules? B~lam-blam, Trayvon my brother you're dead! From the art works perspective I take it you don't like Mardi Gras parades much either? All kidding aside it works for me, so party with your art. Interesting the way the trucks/people are diagonally tilted and going down the drain also. That whole page rolled filter Fx? hummm....and the opacity? White Power!!! lol
He Who
creativematrix24-Apr-2012 02:38
Wow, Laurie! This is wonderful and powerful. What a great poem. I'm so sorry that this is your reality, though. :-(
creativematrix23-Apr-2012 16:58
Wonderful! Scary! Good poem. I love the way people can concentrate a thought so succinctly by having a set of restrictions. I have never seen a bad cinquain poem.
Almita the cybergrannie
creativematrix23-Apr-2012 16:56
I like this. Very well done.
Ann