Upload up to three images illustrating "framing in the frame."
I didn't have time this week to get out and shoot, so I decided to pull three images from last year that I shot with the "frame within the frame" concept in mind.
Instructor's Comments:
All three images are good, Chuck, but let's look a bit closer:
#1: Good situation, but consider that the bottom right clipping of the stone wall and the bright portion at the upper right are distractions. an easy fix, though. Crop in a little tighter or zoom out slightly. The issue is that clipping the tip of the wall is weak composition. For the bright spot, just tone it down using the burn tool, curve adjustment layer, or any method you use to tone down bright areas.
#2: Very clever image and excellent lesson example! The window opening and the silouhette act to draw the eye to the distant hillside dwellings. What really works well here is the openness of the silouhette. Nothing is too blocked up, which is an issue with silouhettes in general. Excellent work and a Photo of the Week!!
#3: Excellent job of seeing on this one and excellent composition, but the sky is too bright and is washing out part of the building. Since the barbed wire is black anyway, you might want to try to darken the entire image to bring in some detail to the top of the building.