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Butte College Staircase
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02-SEP-2005 Cheryl Hawkins

September 2, 2005
Butte College Staircase

I'm taking a photography class at the local Community College. Part of the
grade is based on critiques. Hopefully, after the class, I'll be able to comment
more intelligently on your photos!!! LOL


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gary becker16-Sep-2005 14:03
Beautiful lines and colors.
scott clarke06-Sep-2005 03:52
Yes very nice indeed.
Guest 06-Sep-2005 01:09
this be real cool chicklet! (did I fail the clasS!
Ray :)05-Sep-2005 20:33
You have made the grade in photography if you hunt out everyday objects like this and turn them into pieces of art.
Love the steely blues.
Guest 04-Sep-2005 06:13
Interesting lines and blue tone. I agree aboput the good use of light. I guess the background with the blue barr in the middle doesn`t help this photo so much . :-)

I`m nbot sure if this is the right way to critique, but I want to be sure that I`ll be on your critics list, because I know this really helps to improve photography, so that please feel free to come and critique my photos ;-)
Cheryl Hawkins03-Sep-2005 16:08
Karen, you could probably teach the class!!!!! LOL
Karen Stuebing03-Sep-2005 09:55
Lots of neat lines and excellent use of light and dof. Hmm, guess I could use a course on critiquing too. :) How about, the emphasis on the metallic elements juxtaposed with the softness of the view beyond the window creates an abstraction that speaks to me of nerves stretched taut but not frayed. The blue toning creates a complementary mood. Ok, where are they giving that course. LOL.
Knox O03-Sep-2005 01:08
or you could just use a thesaurus (like I do) to change words like "great" and "nice".

great shot! ....heehee
Cheryl Hawkins02-Sep-2005 22:50
Yeah, I'm sure I will Stu! LMAO
Stu02-Sep-2005 22:46
You'll put us all to shame!
George Christakos02-Sep-2005 21:58
It seems that your lessons might be very good if I judge by the result here. Very nice detailed shot.