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Scene 8

The cat had jumped on a sewing machine knocking a box of bobbins to the floor.
Above Scruffy's head was a bulletin board displaying several yellowed and tattered newspaper clippings. I stepped into the room and strolled over to it scratching the cat's head while I glanced at the clippings. They were mostly wedding announcements with pictures of women in flowing white gowns. Each announcement stated, Bride's dress designed and created by Mary Reed.
The room chilled and gloominess surrounded me like a cloud covering the sun on a summery day. I glanced out the window. The sunny day had turned slate gray.
The cat arched his back and hissed at me then jumped to the floor and shot out of the room and down the stairs as if the devil him self was chasing him.
The quick departure gave me pause and I too felt like I had to get out of that room. I started toward the doorway when the door slammed closed. I felt trapped!
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Sue Robertson13-Oct-2009 23:39
Oh yes this is very dark and scary!...there is even a ghostly figure in the picture on the wall...
poetry66612-Oct-2009 23:00
Another edge of the seat chapter...and an entrapment as well..great stuff Char. Love that cat..BV!
Jay Levin12-Oct-2009 22:04
That black cat was an omen to get out of there as fast as you could, Char! V
Patricia Kay11-Oct-2009 20:59
Definately got goose bumps now Char...BV
Guest 11-Oct-2009 17:36
Oh Char, spoookier, and more spooky, , can't wait, lol.,love it.
January Grey11-Oct-2009 17:36
Keep going, Char! More more more! A really neat image! Well done! V~
Sheila11-Oct-2009 12:32
Fabulous shot and pp.
I'm on tenterhooks for the next episode.
Neal Nye11-Oct-2009 11:15
You've done such a fabulous job on these images! Wonderful details in them and they fit the story perfectly. This whole thing is so impressive!
Ali Majdfar11-Oct-2009 10:57
Fantastic fear mood, ~V
LeuAnna Taylor11-Oct-2009 06:19
Great job, Char on the both the shot and the story - a real page-turner!
Frank Wilson11-Oct-2009 03:36
This is good work. Very good work!
carol j. phipps11-Oct-2009 03:08
Definitely scary shot! Well done!
Hank Vander Velde11-Oct-2009 01:40
Soooo spooky Char. Great image and most suspenseful story.
Cindi Smith11-Oct-2009 01:03
Oh, I'm going to have nightmares! Oh my, can't wait til tomorrow's posting!V
Marcia Colelli11-Oct-2009 00:50
Wow, this one gives me goosebumps, love it. Keep up the great work V
laine10-Oct-2009 23:35
Yep, double goosebumps now...loving this and your black cat shot.
Marcia Rules10-Oct-2009 22:02
brilliant albeit full of mystique. great imaging..V
bill friedlander10-Oct-2009 19:20
This is a great image, despite the hair raising narrative. Love the highlighted outlines of the dark objects. V
Tom Munson10-Oct-2009 18:13
This is fun, Char! Can't wait till tomorrow!
waterfalls man10-Oct-2009 13:50
Great Work Keep it up V
Jim Coffman10-Oct-2009 13:44
Great work,Char! This is a rather spooky scene. V
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