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14-DEC-2006 Gary Martin

Mince pies
by Gary Martin

Llanelli, Wales

My wife made the mince pies for xmas this afternoon so I took advantage of getting an entry for this assignment. I'm still hoping to something a little more subtle but I may run out of time.

Canon EOS 20D ,Sigma DG500 Super flash
1/250s f/7.1 at 65.0mm iso200 full exif

other sizes: small medium large original auto
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Guest 15-Dec-2006 04:10
Well everyone is correct in their own view.. this could be used for an ad.. but you are right.. it should have been turned.. nice try though..
Ron Crain14-Dec-2006 22:53
Additional critique from what's already mentioned.
1. Jar needs to be turned so you see the full name.
2. Jar should be full, even though it was "used" to back the cookies.
3. "I" would have not centered the tray in the background.

Good job though
J Bryan Kramer14-Dec-2006 22:44
Has a bit of the case of strobe burn, the light is too flat.
Terri Steele14-Dec-2006 22:36
I think this is great!
Guest 14-Dec-2006 22:17
Nice job, I like the subtle blur of the pies in the background.