This is a very strong image, but I think it could greatly benefit from some post processing. Do you have Photoshop? If I were you, I would do levels, hue/saturation to bring down the green, work on the lens flare, tone down the lights (they are distracting), and brightness/contrast (to bring back some of the contrast lost from hue/saturation). That could be just me however.
Compositionally this is still very strong, and this is a great gallery. Voted.
