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05-JAN-2010 (c) Doug Cruden

6th - "Heart of Darkness"

Cheltenham, Glos

(Joseph Conrad's wonderfully sinister and evocative 1899 novel)

I remember reading this book in my early teens, and then a few years later being blown away (almost literally) by Francis Ford Coppola's outstanding reworking of Conrad's themes and motifs in Apocalypse Now. Some of those scenes are with me now, as vivid as the day I saw them; and it's a lasting tribute to Conrad that I must have reread Heart of Darkness half-a-dozen times over the years and still get new nuances and meaning from his prose. Favourite line from the film? Has to be "'Never get out of the boat'. Absolutely goddamn right! Unless you were goin' all the way". Don't know why, there are many much more famous lines, but I just love the way Martin Sheen says it...

Also around the same time as the film, was a release by that fine Scottish post-punk band Positive Noise, coincidentally entitled...'Heart of Darkness'! It had wonderfully vague but sinister cover art which was the inspiration for the shot today

For the technical minded of you, this is another lith-treated B&W conversion, very similar to the others this month, the one main difference being that I purposely moved the camera during the exposure to make the blurry effect. File was opened into Camera Raw, Clarity pushed to 100%, Contrast enhanced too. Then into CS3, duplicate layer made and then a B&W Adjustment layer too, this time using the Red Filter preset. Images was flattened, then a Curves Adjustment layer was made; the Red and Green channels were tweaked until I got the effect I was after. Surprisingly, I then added a Diffuse Glow to the Background layer :o). The whole lot was then flattened and resized for the web. Quite how well this shot has worked is up for debate, so please pile in with your comments, good bad and ugly!

Wednesday 6th's don't-go-down-that-spooky-passage-Doug-goodness-knows-what's-lurking-there entry to the Challenge; click here for other monochromed Pbasers in January

Nikon D300 ,Nikkor 28mm f/2.8D AF
0.60s f/2.8 at 28.0mm iso200 full exif

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malcolm haslam22-Jan-2010 11:04
Excellent.
Sheila07-Jan-2010 21:57
I'm with Stewart on this one Doug. Interesting, but there doesn't seem to be a subject.
Fay Stout07-Jan-2010 16:28
Hmmmm... is it my eyes or is it my computer screen causing this?
Mieke WA Minkjan07-Jan-2010 07:08
surely it looks mysterious, don't know the book...
Carl and Racine Erland07-Jan-2010 05:55
I really like the concept and the tones...I find the light in the centre (I think it's a light) just a bit bright....otherwise works for me!
Mary Terry07-Jan-2010 01:20
Interesting image but it makes me a little dizzy...
Walter Otto Koenig07-Jan-2010 01:12
"The Horror, the Horror" as Kurtz said in his final words in "The Heart of Darkness", one of my favorite novels, by one of my favorite authors. Your description makes this work nicely, otherwise I might be tempted to say, increase shutter speed, raise ISO and damn the torpedoes. :)
carol j. phipps07-Jan-2010 00:28
Nice long paint strokes.
Phillip Normanton07-Jan-2010 00:11
Damn, I forgot my boat! lol. I like! But the light(?) is just a bit too bright and attention-grabbing for me (maybe I was thrown by the title) - if you cropped it to just the bottom left quarter that'd do it for me :o))
lisamidi06-Jan-2010 23:33
Very artistic with lots of movement, a little spooky... love this! v
Cindi Smith06-Jan-2010 21:51
Wow, very artistic. I like this and the story behind it....haven't read the book, though.
Matylda Lempel-Chareza Photography06-Jan-2010 20:24
nice abstract,Doug
Stewart Mitchell06-Jan-2010 19:51
For me these "blur" images work best when there are existing strong lines in the direction of the motion, like trees (vertical) or waves (horizontal), then you still have a strong sense of the what the subject is and can relate to it. This nearly works, but for me the dark bit lower left and the bright patches in the upper centre detract from the whole. Probably not very clear in words but here is an example of what I meanhttp://www.pbase.com/smit10pics/image/113293553
Kevin Chester06-Jan-2010 18:30
The end result is effective and the motion blurr works well. No idea what the original image looked like but it sounds like a lot of processing so I imagine it looked nothing at all like this.
Guest 06-Jan-2010 17:50
I'll never make it to the door.... :)
J. Scott Coile06-Jan-2010 16:12
Nice use of motion to add mystery. That book (and the movie Apocalypse Now) rocked my world in my teen years!
Ronald Bijtenhoorn06-Jan-2010 16:08
Like these kind of arty images
Barbara Heide06-Jan-2010 15:27
works for me... this kind of "Gilles Navet" abstraction... very attractive and nice tones!
Guest 06-Jan-2010 15:26
I like the artisitic and to use someone else's words 'ghostly' effect and the pink tones. Not sure I''d print it for the wall but I think it works well fr the challenge!
Ed McConnell06-Jan-2010 13:36
cool and weird..good info on the work needed for this image.
Guest 06-Jan-2010 13:23
Spooky image Doug. I'm glad I'm sitting here in front of my computer!!!!
Guest 06-Jan-2010 12:40
Hmmmmmmmm. Ghostly is a good way to describe it. I am not sure I like it, its got good parts, and bad parts... OK actually I've been looking for a while, and I actually think I really like it lol. only the vertical movements work really well, the contrast is great. the hair/light thing in the bottom left is a little distraction, looks like it could have easily been cloned out as well.
Available Light Images06-Jan-2010 12:12
Superb book, which I unpacked today... this is a captivating visual representation as well... super work Doug...
Yvonne06-Jan-2010 11:44
Spooky ambiance, expect to see a figure emanating from the mist...
Bernard Davis06-Jan-2010 11:03
Looks like a bad trip. Not one of your better ones, perhaps if the central area, (the window?) had been focussed it would have held me in there.
Kathryn06-Jan-2010 10:35
Ghostly indeed, like the pink.
Stephanie06-Jan-2010 10:09
Sorry Doug - this photo is giving me the DT's. (I feel as though I've had too many Delirium Tremons beers)...... :^IIII
borisalex06-Jan-2010 09:31
Artful and a great photo Doug!
He´s one of my favorite writer too!
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