you catched it in a very tender way, love the details under her eyes and the good picture qualtity ! A tip, if you beliefe that you are already finished, just take the sharpening pensil and click carfully on things you want to underline, for exaple the earring, her eyes, the eyebrowns, the thing in her hair, but realy be carfuly and avoid the contact with other parts like skin or folds,! This is very good already, but you do the same thing i do often too, you oversharp some parts, in this case i think the hair is oversharped and looks wet or fatend, Cheers Günter